haiku today

Today I’ve been playing around writing haiku. This is a first for me so any constructive criticism  would be welcome.

Thanks.

 

I don’t want to smile
All I want to do is cry
I just hate my life

I’m not very happy today hence the tone. Here’s another.

 

Depressed and on drugs
Living a life full of pain
I’m just not happy

 

Another one.

 

Heroin addict
It is a hard life to live
And hard to escape

 

Last one.

 

He was a junkie
And he lived that junkie life
But he escaped to

 

Peace x

 

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